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This thread is for comments and feedback on Cory's Father, by Francesca Forrest.
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Amy Sisson
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Lovely story! It conveys a lot in a short space.
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KNB
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That's a great Borderlands story. Evocative and elegant.
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AlisonR
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Love this! Very intriguing. Please tell me this is the start of a novel! :-)
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Asakiyume
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Actually, there is a sort of novel brewing, but I'm not sure if I can make it all come together right--but thanks for asking, and for commenting on the story! (Asakiyume=Francesca)
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Ron Collins
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That would be good. As a stand alone it's interesting for a moment, but not overly memorable. But it clearly has potential (clearly to me, anyway) to be a considerably more interesting piece at novella or longer length.
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Asakiyume
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Well here's hoping! I'll work to make it happen.
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amalmohtar
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This was WONDERFUL -- I just wish it hadn't stopped there! The border comes rolling in like the shadow of a cloud moving across the land. It feels like the air before a thunderstorm, and it smells like sweet fern.... So gorgeous.
Reading the comments, I am VERY glad you've said there's a novel, because I would love to read it. I want to know more about this mother and her many children, more about the bargain she made with the river! Utterly lovely, Francesca.
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Asakiyume
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So glad you liked the story! Yes, it is short... but there will, God willing, eventually be more.
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